Trash Talk (Rap) #7: Hot Shot

[Desperado]

(some Lyrics based on Jin's "Gimmick" & Fabolous's "Breathe")

[CHORUS]

What you thought?... I was a Gimmick?,
Come on man gimme a minute,
What me to bring it?... I'll bring it,
I got nothing to lose,
I'll tear a bunch of critics,
from start to finish,
I've got something to prove,
and that's that I'm the true balla,
the shot calla,
and Hot Shot is better than all the othas

[VERSE 1]

Yo these playas can't breathe when I come through,
my team too,
Some shoes,
gotta be Nike man,
It's not even funny they can't BREATHE,
The D too tight,
The left looks too right,
You know what?... You right,
These playas can't BREATHE //

Look look... they hearts racin',
They start chasin',
But I'm so fast when I blow past,
That they can't BREATHE,
In the presence of the man,
Your team's past looks better than ya future in City Slam,
You betta BREATHE //

Spitting acid everywhere,
I don't care... don't stare,
if you stupid enough to get in my way,
come see me on the court if you think you can play //

[CHORUS]

What you thought?... I was a Gimmick?,
Come on man gimme a minute,
What me to bring it?... I'll bring it,
I got nothing to lose,
I'll tear a bunch of critics,
from start to finish,
I've got something to prove,
and that's that I'm the true balla,
the shot calla,
and Hot Shot is better than all the othas

[VERSE 2]

Ballin' is in my vains,
it's stuck in my brain,
hitting you hard like a train,
go ahead try and contain,
but you can't get higher then my game,
but you can try but you must be insane,
if you think you can be me... ask anyone... they'll tell you the same //

Nike is at the top,
heading for that ring,
looks like we aint gonna stop,
until we win the whole thing,

In the end Nike gonna hold up that trophy,
yes you might have the stolen the 3v3 one from me,
but you can't even start to gather,
because our trophy will be bigger,
and like your girl said to you last night,
"size DOES matter" //

[CHORUS]

What you thought?... I was a Gimmick?,
Come on man gimme a minute,
What me to bring it?... I'll bring it,
I got nothing to lose,
I'll tear a bunch of critics,
from start to finish,
I've got something to prove,
and that's that I'm the true balla,
the shot calla,
and Hot Shot is better than all the othas

[phillyphan]

I liked it, it was pretty entertaining. I thought the part about "size does matter" was funny. Not to mention its pretty good trash talk. This one flowed great. I didn't find myself having to re-read any parts because of it being choppy. Its not my favorite. But its up there.

3 points awarded.